Informal style – Formal style
I’m writing this report to tell you what I think – The aim of this report is to suggest
… need to be more modern – are in need of being updated
… is not used enough – is underused
Not many people know about the centre. – The centre is not very well-known in the community.
… they aren’t things that young people like that much – they are not appealing enough to young people
… a cheap way of getting – … an inexpensive way of attracting
… would make more young people use the centre – would certainly attract more young people to the centre