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a)
1 C 2 A 3 В
(Suggested Answer)
Activities: Currently, there is a lack of outings and sports that appeal to children. I would strongly suggest introducing more exciting activities such as archery and go-karting.
Publicity: In addition, the social networking page is fairly inactive. It would be a good idea to post regular updates and distribute a monthly newsletter.
Cost: Moreover, the camp is expensive in comparison to other camps. I am confident that more children would sign up if we reduced the prices and offered discounted rates for group bookings.
b)
1 To make suggestions on how to improve the youth summer camp to attract more children.
2 Suggestions about how to attract more children.
3 Formal.
1 C 2 A 3 В
(Suggested Answer)
Activities: Currently, there is a lack of outings and sports that appeal to children. I would strongly suggest introducing more exciting activities such as archery and go-karting.
Publicity: In addition, the social networking page is fairly inactive. It would be a good idea to post regular updates and distribute a monthly newsletter.
Cost: Moreover, the camp is expensive in comparison to other camps. I am confident that more children would sign up if we reduced the prices and offered discounted rates for group bookings.
b)
1 To make suggestions on how to improve the youth summer camp to attract more children.
2 Suggestions about how to attract more children.
3 Formal.